Good-bye My friend
by
Mae Wolf
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Beginning:
One day back in the spring of 2000 while i was cleaning my house, My aunt Sonya bought a starnger out ot see me about baby-sitting for her. The stranger's name was Sabrina Snowshone, Her daughter's name was Tabisha.
When i first met Sabrina I could not understand a word of what she was saying. She talks so fast.
When i first met Sabrina I could not understand a word of what she was saying. She talks so fast.
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- Little kitten writes: "Thats so sad here you have a friendship breaking up."
- The author writes: "Thanks Kaycee"
- Kaycee writes: "I am sorry to hear about your relationship with your friend, however I do agree that your child's feelings come first. The line "I wonder why Sabrina hates Daisy?" is a little awkward at the end of the essay. Maybe you can place it elsewhere in the piece. Just a suggestion. Good Job!"
- The author writes: "Thanks Joanna"
- Joanna writes: "Hi, Great story. Very sad. It is always so sad to end a friendship no matter the reason. I like your narration. You made the story interesting."
- The author writes: "Thanks Elyce,"
- Elyce writes: "hmm thats sad that someone can do that after everything. I know how it is to say goodbye though. Good job expressing that feeling. but me sorry."